I really like this for an intro. The WTF factor of the hapless unknowing reader is great. XD I'd be tempted to say 'picked out the key words' instead of 'picked out the important words' just so there isn't *too* much of the wtf, but that's more preference than helpful feedy.
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Date: 2006-11-06 11:37 am (UTC)I really like this for an intro. The WTF factor of the hapless unknowing reader is great. XD I'd be tempted to say 'picked out the key words' instead of 'picked out the important words' just so there isn't *too* much of the wtf, but that's more preference than helpful feedy.
Goooo NaNo! *shakes pompoms*