I jump all over the place with commas. ^-~ (I'm a lot worse with semi-colons anyway. Ask Becca; I must drive her mad. ;p)

I'm sure it will. Any opening this intricate is bound to deliver up a good story. (I'd go mad working in letters/clues/riddles like this.)

Uhm... *shuffles feet* In my case, that's a pretty good question... I wouldn't recommend 'Wayward Dreams', 'Crownless' and 'Phantasmagoria', mostly because those are begging for a rewrite someday soon. (Actually, all of them are, but those need it to learn how to stand on their own feet.)

I'd recommend either 'Barriers' or 'Vermin' for the lirveron snippets (and that lot features most often in Talechasing challenges) and it's free game on all the rest. Hope that helps any. ^-^; *needs to make a list of 'how to read things' one day*