OH HEY SO CAN I JUST MAKE A COMMENT OF QUOTING BITS WE WROTE TOGETHER AND SQUEEING? I THINK I CAN. THAT WOULD BE PRETTY SWEET.
And I say again, man, sometimes I have no idea which of us wrote what. NO IDEA. It all seems awesome, maybe you wrote the whole thing.
So I love all those little touches that mean the entire lot of brothers dote on Assili, and its a very natural thing for them. Like they will wear what she wants for her birthday, and they will (try) to get her thing she likes for HER as well as for a private battle. Even though clearly Kanera has the biggest soft spot for her, there are little touches of Sahid being a good big brother here and there. Love it. (agh it makes me remember Assili and Sahid's final 'talk' and idbgudbdg my heart. MY HEART)
I love Sahid. Like, a lot. Not just in the omfg repressed ghei wants to fuck men way, but in the genuine like... He's a dick. BUT HE HAS DEPTH TOO. I suppose he was just a dick for the sake, but as you've developed Kazin I think he has very clear motives and reasons for being how he is. He's so awesome. Like just his first line in this, being like "Geez, grandpa, quiet" is like so full of character and cocky and stuff yes
And like I said in chatbox, I love Shiz being all "Sigh. No father. omfffg...." and bored. She has heard this shit far too long XD
I'm only at that point in the text, what.
Kanera. So. Flamboyant. BUT HE ISN'T PUTTING IT ON. Like the flamboyancy, but also the love. Narti. I cannot even WORDS how much Assili means to Kanera. He adores her. To pieces. HE LOVES HIS BBSIS. AND I LOVE HER TOO, I love seeing her acting like a little girl being spoilt, rather than an empress being doted on. Its adorable. Her little crinkle-nose smile jufgbdufbgudfg
Its also like... Sahid and Kanera's relationship too? I love it. Its like they're trying to one up each other, and it seems like it's very friction filled, but I also feel like they would totally have each others backs. Like they can talk all the shit about the other, but if anyone else said anything they'd jump down their throats. Its like.... duigbdg I just want brother fics too. I WANT IT ALL. And for Kanera its very comfortable, because even if he thinks Sahid is a dick and a prick and other ick words, he's also very content. Because he's there in front, doing all the shit and and leaving Kanera to skate through life lazily. Like being thrust into the front position after Sahid's death will be hard for him for that, but also it would be such a slap to him. For all his thinking "someone's going to kill Sahid for being a dickcock", he would never have seriously thought he was in any danger of losing his big brother.
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And I say again, man, sometimes I have no idea which of us wrote what. NO IDEA. It all seems awesome, maybe you wrote the whole thing.
So I love all those little touches that mean the entire lot of brothers dote on Assili, and its a very natural thing for them. Like they will wear what she wants for her birthday, and they will (try) to get her thing she likes for HER as well as for a private battle. Even though clearly Kanera has the biggest soft spot for her, there are little touches of Sahid being a good big brother here and there. Love it.
(agh it makes me remember Assili and Sahid's final 'talk' and idbgudbdg my heart. MY HEART)
I love Sahid. Like, a lot. Not just in the omfg repressed ghei wants to fuck men way, but in the genuine like... He's a dick. BUT HE HAS DEPTH TOO. I suppose he was just a dick for the sake, but as you've developed Kazin I think he has very clear motives and reasons for being how he is. He's so awesome. Like just his first line in this, being like "Geez, grandpa, quiet" is like so full of character and cocky and stuff yes
And like I said in chatbox, I love Shiz being all "Sigh. No father. omfffg...." and bored. She has heard this shit far too long XD
I'm only at that point in the text, what.
Kanera. So. Flamboyant. BUT HE ISN'T PUTTING IT ON. Like the flamboyancy, but also the love. Narti. I cannot even WORDS how much Assili means to Kanera. He adores her. To pieces. HE LOVES HIS BBSIS. AND I LOVE HER TOO, I love seeing her acting like a little girl being spoilt, rather than an empress being doted on. Its adorable. Her little crinkle-nose smile jufgbdufbgudfg
Its also like... Sahid and Kanera's relationship too? I love it. Its like they're trying to one up each other, and it seems like it's very friction filled, but I also feel like they would totally have each others backs. Like they can talk all the shit about the other, but if anyone else said anything they'd jump down their throats. Its like.... duigbdg I just want brother fics too. I WANT IT ALL.
And for Kanera its very comfortable, because even if he thinks Sahid is a dick and a prick and other ick words, he's also very content. Because he's there in front, doing all the shit and and leaving Kanera to skate through life lazily. Like being thrust into the front position after Sahid's death will be hard for him for that, but also it would be such a slap to him. For all his thinking "someone's going to kill Sahid for being a dickcock", he would never have seriously thought he was in any danger of losing his big brother.
This has nothing to do with this fic, aha...