ext_139684 ([identity profile] drazzi.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] yrae 2014-04-22 02:55 pm (UTC)

MORE TO DO WITH THE FIC its like Kanera is all FLOWERS AND SPEECHY AND GUSHING and its so natural. But then Sahid does it and its like SO UNNATURAL. I love it. I love different brothers. I LOVE THIS FAMILY. WHY MUST IT BE DESTROYED? - besides the obvious reasons

‘It’s vanilla-scented,’ she said.
Shizaaqa cocked an eyebrow. ‘So you’ll have her smelling like a sweet shop?’ she accused.
‘It’s a young scent, Mother,’ Assili explained

I love that. Because its just SO very mother/daughter. Old generation not wanting to accept what the youth are changing into and such. ITS SO REAL.

I love that Kanera is always the one giving Shoaib little nudges, touches and such. And.. that like... He clearly LOVES being a big brother. He loves both his siblings, but he can really dote on Assili and he can't with Shaoib, because he feels like he needs to help him become a man, but he doesn't know how to do it. Because (A) that's not really his fucking job as a young man and (B) there's no fucking helping Shaoib. But like just little touches. Little things show his affections and that he's there dnfgbfgbfg yes.
Why am I spazzing out about my own char djgbdg

Assili bb, she is so good. Even with a shitty present, she is so polite and good. SHE IS A GOOD GIRL. NOL YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW. I love my Assili bb <3 I love that she very clearly has three different faces for her brothers, because they are three very different people.

Man, did I ever wrote Zakaariss in a godmod Edward Cullen light? Pfffffffff..... heissupposedtobehotdoh.

Sahid snorted and folded his arms as best as his glass would allow him. ‘Hard to be comfortable with a rod as solid as his up your ar… your backside.’
YEAH SAHID YOU'D LOVE TO THINK ABOUT ZAKKY'S BACKSIDE.

But seriously
‘Well, he may have been invited to a family gathering, but he’s clearly not comfortable enough to be counted as such yet.’
‘Hard to be comfortable with a rod as solid as his up your ar… your backside.’
‘Well, I’m not sure he has such a thing, under all that fabric.’
‘Probably not. The man clearly never shits.’

Is just such a... dfugbdfg BROTHERS. BROTHERS JUDGING PEOPLE TOGETHER. BEING YOUNG AND IMMATURE and that's just what I was talking about before. You know they like to tease each other, but they also like to rally against others together. And especially this guy, who is clearly going to try and take their precious little sister. (Sahid maybe a little from jealousy but same diff) and its just duifgudbg BROTHERS.

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