so she’s probably got another job inside the palace where she can snoop around and find out who’s corrupt, then pop around to their house and knock them off.’ <- *laughs* Ooooh.... I like this development. Wonder where it'll go.
Her eyes were still fixed on the note, but she didn’t look like she was seeing it. ‘Lexa, you idiot,’ she whispered. <- I am honestly confused as to who is looking at the note and who is whispering. ^-^;;
But that's all I have to pick at. ^-^ (And durnit! I want to write, not read! *twitch* One more chapter. Well, two, to make it a nice even number. *twitch*)
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Date: 2007-02-12 07:25 pm (UTC)Her eyes were still fixed on the note, but she didn’t look like she was seeing it. ‘Lexa, you idiot,’ she whispered. <- I am honestly confused as to who is looking at the note and who is whispering. ^-^;;
But that's all I have to pick at. ^-^ (And durnit! I want to write, not read! *twitch* One more chapter. Well, two, to make it a nice even number. *twitch*)
Not that I shall be more useful there...