Dragon Boy

Aug. 9th, 2009 10:24 pm
[identity profile] annarti.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] yrae
Title~ Dragon Boy
Author~ Annarti
Disclaimer~ Completely mine~
Notes~ This is a story written for [livejournal.com profile] creatore_magico, who has been going through a tough move to London, and I thought could do with a bit of a cheering up-come-welcome back to the Internet thing, albeit a very slow, very problematic Internet. So yeah. Plan is to write a Llayan fairytale for all my friends who know the Yrae Chronicles as birthday presents this year :D Saku loves dragons, shippable characters and sexy older men. Throw them together and you get something like this!

Welcome back to the Internets, Ku! I love you~!

( 10 401 words ) <-- that cut is fake. It turned out a good deal longer than expected so it's got a page on bloogum instead of making you read the whole thing in LJ.

Date: 2009-10-17 07:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shanra.livejournal.com
Awwww. But I like getting my brain messed with on occasion... Makes a nice/good decision, though. Definitely easier to read like this. I just want to know how the conversations go in Llayan, really.

Only the old farts know :D
And they, like, never ever used it to scare their children into obedience, mention it in passing by accident, or anything? I'm sorry, Narti, but I can't buy that with the explanations given here.

Someday, I'll figure out how to make it take a little more resolution, but not in the typical Llayan style of talking it out with days and days of long words and rhetoric.

Oooh, you could do that easily. Just summarise it more or less like you did here - throw some mood qualifiers in for Ackerley and maybe mention a highlight or two - like when Oak decides that the Lord does look mighty tasty - and skip to the final scenes. Tada! I doubt anyone is going to begrudge you not writing out those negotiations in detail and stretch and strech the story that way.

(Nuuuu, you just think I'm not helping. You'll be grateful once the story is finished and made of AWESOME WIN. ^-~)

(I'm not fussy about timing. It shall appear when it shall appear - and with a little luck, I might actually have done some serious damage to my online reading pile when it does appear!)

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