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Silent Harmony ~ Rust ~ Prologue
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( Ignore~ the time, people, just ignore~ it and READ! =DD )
Prologue redux! Because Silent Harmony has been frustrating me for ages with its sheer shittiness and total lack of planning for everything before chapter 18. For the record, I'm midway through nineteen. Nothing was working. I'd started that version in April 2003, and hadn't even invented the Own until about a year later. There was just 'may, Nol and a very sketchy Melraan.
Suddenly they all appeared on the scene and went, "LOL HI EVERYONE! Now you have to feel sympathy for characters you've never even met lollerskates 8D" and it sucked. Even Nol barely existed before midway 2003.
The prologue sucked because it just read like history, so now it's told first person from Yan's point of view, and ( more babble for after READING!! )
TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, PEOPLE!
Prologue redux! Because Silent Harmony has been frustrating me for ages with its sheer shittiness and total lack of planning for everything before chapter 18. For the record, I'm midway through nineteen. Nothing was working. I'd started that version in April 2003, and hadn't even invented the Own until about a year later. There was just 'may, Nol and a very sketchy Melraan.
Suddenly they all appeared on the scene and went, "LOL HI EVERYONE! Now you have to feel sympathy for characters you've never even met lollerskates 8D" and it sucked. Even Nol barely existed before midway 2003.
The prologue sucked because it just read like history, so now it's told first person from Yan's point of view, and ( more babble for after READING!! )
TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, PEOPLE!