Your comments are almost as long as the fic XD I love you~
I love the Kazinians <3 I think because they're the first proper family I've got going here, in the traditional sense of mum, dad and a bunch of kids to all have relationships with each other. Twins had one briefly but that only lasted a couple of chapters. But yeah, I love bouncing them all off one another, especially the two boys XD Sahid is such a DICK but he's the only one allowed to be a dick to his bb Kanera. Jealous as all hell that Kanera does better than him without even bloody trying but nobody better point that out in his presence =|
The difference is that Edward Cullen is a woobie pretending to be a brick wall. Zakky actually IS a brick wall. Assili is the way to power so he sucks up to her. It'll develop eventually, but at this stage it's just the quickest route to becoming the general. Also Zakky is hot. SO HOT. Look at that chest, man. LOOK AT IT. I am :D
That is too awesome, you must have written it. See, as I was going through and italicising it all, I got to that bit and grinned because I SWEAR you did that bit. WHOEVER WROTE IT, awesome lines. Good job whoever that was. I'm going to say it was Kanera, safest bet.
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Date: 2014-04-23 10:29 am (UTC)Your comments are almost as long as the fic XD I love you~
I love the Kazinians <3 I think because they're the first proper family I've got going here, in the traditional sense of mum, dad and a bunch of kids to all have relationships with each other. Twins had one briefly but that only lasted a couple of chapters. But yeah, I love bouncing them all off one another, especially the two boys XD Sahid is such a DICK but he's the only one allowed to be a dick to his bb Kanera. Jealous as all hell that Kanera does better than him without even bloody trying but nobody better point that out in his presence =|
The difference is that Edward Cullen is a woobie pretending to be a brick wall. Zakky actually IS a brick wall. Assili is the way to power so he sucks up to her. It'll develop eventually, but at this stage it's just the quickest route to becoming the general. Also Zakky is hot. SO HOT. Look at that chest, man. LOOK AT IT. I am :D
That is too awesome, you must have written it.
See, as I was going through and italicising it all, I got to that bit and grinned because I SWEAR you did that bit. WHOEVER WROTE IT, awesome lines. Good job whoever that was. I'm going to say it was Kanera, safest bet.